With every heartbeat
With every breath,
With every move,
There's only one thing I do,
To cry and remember you....
Whether be day, or be night,
I shed tears, I bear the plight,
Thinking of the happy times,
We spent together
I cry and remember you..............
My heart pains and yells,
Asks me a thousand times,
Why? Why? Why?
You left me behind,
isolated and broken hearted,
Only one thing I do,
To ponder and cry,
And to remember you......
nice aakshu..keep it up..but how can u write this without experience..
ReplyDeletehi..
ReplyDeleteGood one,
but,for whom you have written..........
Nice Creation..... :)
akshu...
ReplyDeletethat really depicts whatever happened in my life...
gr8 writing...keep it up...
I think this poetry needs conversion to song...it will be a gr8 hit...:)
heya...dis is me...jyothsna...gr8
ReplyDeletecnt resist writin' dis in mah diary...
hey ekdum zakas...really nice...really touching.....
ReplyDeleteu r brilliant...
ReplyDeletewow..
keep writing.. :)
@all
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for such praising and encouraging comments..... I'll surely try my level best to keep it up to everyone's expectations... Keep visiting my blog and keep commenting on my poems... If you want to give me some suggestions, you can post the along with your comments... They are whole heartedly welcomed... :P
Thank you once again
Akanksha Talegaonkar
ye acha likha gya hai should be appritiated
ReplyDeletereally heart touching poem!!!!! :'(
ReplyDeletegud work......
ReplyDeleteKeep it up Sister.............